Your thoughts are good but they are a bit too short. You build your readers up to a point then you leave us wondering what next. At Least you could give use a bit more!!!!

Well i must say that the is one of the MOST handsome and innocent looking face i have seen in a long while. i really do hope that your looks is not decieving and after reading through your profile i noticed that you are in a relationship, that's beautiful and i hope you remain faithful!!!!!